Reviews for Lost Hope
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Nice ending and I liked the line "The blood that drips from the blade is a sign that she can't be saved". Good piece.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Nice poem

alan.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Well done, the rhyming was good.. Especially with the first two lines. Keep it Up!