Reviews for Framed by Space
dustytiger chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
wow, this is good, it realy got me thining about what time really is, and how we measure it, this is written very well, an excellent piece of poetry, one thing tough, the ampersants take away from the poetic effect, all the same thank you for sharing
diffident chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
The third stanza was rather trite compared to the previous two, which were lovely. The talk of time in relation to length, width, and depth is kind of messed up, because time is a dimension just like length, width, etc. It's a dimension that goes only in one direction. It's difficult to fathom because it's not visual, but yeah. Other than that, I really like the metaphors in this, and the "frame of space" thing is really awesome. Great job.


PS: My name is Shelby as well. It's the name I don't use, but it's still my name. :)