Reviews for Their Smiles
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Very Uplifting and really sweet! Beautifully written! Thanx for the review!

Sadistikal
Pricilla Grey chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Very sweet. I feel the same way whenever I spend time with my two beautiful nephews.

- Pricilla Grey
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Very interesting; you portray family in such a good way. However, the ending doesn't seem to focus on family, more on youth. It gets a small bit confusing as to what you're saying. Overall, though, there's some great imagery and some strong use of emotion. Just try to be more focused towards the end and you'll have an even better poem.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
an interesting lighthearted poem. keep on going!
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
absolutly right! I know what you mean - I have a half sister and she has a baby Sammy he's a year - I baby sat him for her. compleatly brightened up my week

Kira
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
A very sweet and heartfelt poem. It's nice to hear from you again.
Meus Vox Vocis chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
very true and sweet, I have a three yr old niece myself, and that is so true.