Reviews for Mesmerizing Beauty
lostladyknight chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This one wasn't nearly as sad. I really like that you have the love motif in your poems. Love's a many splended thing afterall.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Cute poem. I love the title. ;)

Twilight Starr
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
very cute
veggie-4head chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Hmm... It was alright. It didn't flow in some places. Not one of my favorites... but good all the same. (I shouldn't talk- my poems aren't that good...)
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
How romantic! This is so sweet, nicely written and it was very beautiful. Good job!
WickedSilence chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
It almost makes me cry, the way you write so tenderly. It's so sweet. I like it, despite the sometimes awkward rhyming. But it's good. Do continue writing!