it's really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really, really! nice..,, Ypu are a very,very! good writer, please update , and your Everything I Never Wanted story too..,,

Have Nice Time :) :)

Just reviewing at this point even tho I know it cant effect the rest of the story... Anyway love Davids character hate Kyle.

Great story! Can't wait for the epilogue! xD

This was such a beautiful yet deliciously in a certain way dark story and I like how you didn't do like a lot of other authors did which is make the girl just keep loving one guy. I really hope you upload the epilogue

DAMN DAMN DAMN-Sara-I REALLY REALLY WANT MORE OF THIS STORY-PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE TELL ME YOU ARE STILL PLANNING ON WRITING MORE OF THIS AND HOPEFULLY FINISHING IT-I need to KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

DAMN DAMN DAMN-I was really hoping she would kill Eric-oh well! I cannot believe Carson is letting her go-he has to have something planned and it can't be good! I am so glad that at this point Liam is ok too. My heart broke for David tho with what she told him and I am hoping everything Eric told her about Kyle just playing her was all a lie.

MY MY MY what a MAJOR turn of EVENTS! I was hoping Kyle wasn't killed and I just don't know which brother to believe regarding the story about Katherine ALTHOUGH I am leaning towards believing Kyle-I think David is too INVESTED and to EMOTIONAL where Katherine is concerned-BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN CHAPTER AGAIN!

OH BLOODY HELL Sara-I AM SOOOOOOOOOO DAMNED CONFUSED MYSELF! I like all three guys but I am sure I don't want her back with Andy-as she said it would be too WIERD! I nearly died when she saw her brother standing in the foyer and I thought atleast he would have noticed but he didn't. NOW WHAT I AM WONDERING ABOUT is: WHAT THE HELL IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO LIAM? I do not want to see her lose another family member and if that is what Carson is planning and killing her whole family then why would he actually risk the death of his younger siblings? Oh what a TANGLED WEB you have WEAVED!

DAMN DAMN DAMN Sara-WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED? Oh I am sure poor Elizabeth isn't happy with herself for ADMITTING her FEELINGS for Kyle! I know David was a crazy, cocky prick but I had hoped she would fall in LOVE with him but NOW I really like Kyle too and to find out Andy was per se 'still alive' part of me wanted her to get back with him BUT under the circumstances-I am not sure after all the time she grieved for him I am not sure that would be possible! DAMN I HAVE GOTTEN TOOOOOOO ATTACHED TO THIS STORY!

LOL Girl-I could not HELP BUT LAUGH MY ASS off with this chapter-David and Kyle's reaction to a girl's menstraul cycle was PRICELESS-especially David's reaction! Lord Sara-you are AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT!

WHAT THE BLOODY FU** Sara! ANDY? NOT DEAD? OH I CANNOT BLAME her for being EXTREMELY PISSED and CONFUSED! I wouldn't mind KILLING Eric either! You have sooooooooooo ENRAPTURED with this story and ENTHRALLED with the RANGE OF EMOTIONS you have within this story-DOWN RIGHT OUT OF THIS WORLD! Cannot wait for more!

Well that was quite a bit of a shock Sara! My heart BREAKS for everything Elizabeth has ENDURED and is STILL ENDURING! I nearly FELL OVER when he told her he 'LOVED' her but truly, does he really? He atleast have admitted his feelings for her whether she has accepted it or not whereas David REFUSES TO ADMIT his FEELINGS! I am nearing the end of the chapters you have and already MOURNING that there is no more available at this time!

DAMN IT-I AM READY TO KILL Carson-what a major asshole! I am beginning to really like Kyle but I also like David even as a cocky bastard but I can understand why he won't admit his feelings for Elizabeth. I REALLY REALLY LOVE Elizabeth's character-she has her fears yet she is so STRONG IN SPIRIT. It is hard for me to read rapes but it also depends on how it is written and yours was done tastefully as far as I am concerned and very mild and non descript. It isn't an easy topic to write but it was done WELL. I do have to WONDER what Carson has planned for her as he says he has plenty of sex slaves-hmmmm wonder where you are taking this and eager to know more-EXCELLENT CHAPTER again!

OMG GIRL-I AM POSITIVELY DYING! Sis went to bed so couldn't leave reviews for previous chapters but EVERYTHING was TOTALLY AMAZING-I CANNOT BELIEVE that they actually killed him-I thought somehow they would come to some kind of UNDERSTANDING-I SURE AS HELL WAS WRONG! Another BRILLIANT chapter and previous chapters-I AM ABSOLUTELY GAGA over this story and your writing-I really do hope that it is completed someday and now I am on to the next chapter!

One I was really really SURPRISED to see that Kyle could actually be 'nice' to Elizabeth and I wonder what is going to happen to Eric-you have DEFINITELY written this with such EMOTION, INTRIGUE AND SUSPENSE-ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL Sara!