|Reviews for trust|
| Feeshes chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I stand by what I've said. A most beautiful mind indeed..I do home youve found it.
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Both your stories are pretty amazing. Like stop . Wonderful.
| Broken Bright Eyes chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
Way better than falling stars and broken hearts...
| Distant Dreams chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
You said thanks for reading, now I'm telling you, thanks for writing. This is really special.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Wow, nice piece. You have so many different interesting lines in here, and that makes this more than just a piece rambling on about how you can't trust someone or you can trust someone or just trust in general. I like the 47 hearts line, too. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
your beginnings and endings are flawless. in awe.
| perdita's kiss chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
| Ophelia's Crown chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
have you ever thought of trying slam poetry? this has so much raw emotion in it that i think it would be perfect to perform. great job on the piece and i look forward to reading your other works. keep it up.