Reviews for Thin
just dani chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
o gosh this is so disturbing.

great job of portraying that sick reality some ppl go through..
trash can art chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
I love the last line. Spectacular wording. :bows to the bandit queen:
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
ah. touchy subject. i like the ending.
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Wonderful imagery-great job. It's beautiful!

I really enjoyed this! I plan to rad the rest of yor stuff!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Sad, but true statement about society. Powerful message. Good haiku.