|Reviews for Thin|
| just dani chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
o gosh this is so disturbing.
great job of portraying that sick reality some ppl go through..
| trash can art chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
I love the last line. Spectacular wording. :bows to the bandit queen:
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
ah. touchy subject. i like the ending.
| Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Wonderful imagery-great job. It's beautiful!
I really enjoyed this! I plan to rad the rest of yor stuff!
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Sad, but true statement about society. Powerful message. Good haiku.