| Reviews for Wrap In |
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   All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/28/2006 Again, you really need puncuation! It's hard to follow the poem with out it. Nice poem overall. Rowan. |
| Violet Marx chapter 1 . 12/13/2006 I like it. :] It's very truthful. |
| Psychedelia chapter 1 . 9/27/2006 Pretty nice. Not sure what you mean by the lack of punctuation though. |
| S. R. Devaste chapter 1 . 9/4/2006 The poem itself has a nice flow and I like the first line, and dreams wrapped up in someone else, but after that it just kind of disinagrates into a bunch of pretty words slowly loosing their meaning. |
| believe-in-futures chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 Should it be esophagus or sarcophogus at the end of the second stanza? I really like the first stanza. I also like the second but the third doesn't work for me. The end ties it all together and It isn't fatal to the poem, I just don't like it. I think it's a cop out compared to your first two stanzas. The only bit I like is the line, "feeling young with old ideas". Not a bad poem. |
| Stale.Cracker chapter 1 . 8/31/2006 OMG SINEWSICLE IL THISbut espohagus sorta kills the rhythm...other than that, it was GREAT!~FrodoPLEASE REVIEW BACK 8D |