|Reviews for Chains|
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Good poem. I think she likes the chains.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
"Baby, do you like your chains?/Oh baby do you love your veins?/How will you feel when neither remain?" This part (or parts), especially the last line, were wonderful. Good job. :)
| Odds Are Against Us chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
When you’re sucking it’s like you’ve got nothin’ to lose i LOVE that
| criti-sized chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Very impressive poem/song. The words that you used made it a very imaginable scenario, and the display of emotion was great.