I was searching for yaoi stories to entertain myself with, also because I am trying to improve my writing skills as well by studying other styles of writing. [None published as of now, not sure if ever lol. They are so bad]. But what I really want to say is, I adore your writing style, it is easy flowing and easy to read, not to mention the way you portray Ezra is simply amazing, just perfect. He's the kind of character that I adore watching. The slightly unstable, crazy personality type that makes you laugh but also cant help but be attracted to, anticipating his next move. After I finished Eraser I went through some of your other work and read half of Razorblade Romance. Your skill has come so far, i applaud you.

omg i could't stop laughing at this conversation and i already love Ezra i mean anyone whos awesom enough to walk around with a pika pushie has my atomatic respects:)

Nooooooooooo come back to meeeeee

Keep going

Ugh seriously it's people like you that make me think about eating lactose if i was lactose intolerant. Which I'm not, but the analogy was necessary to convey the anticipation for the next chapter that will probably never come to be.

Funtabulistic story, please attempt to keep going. I love it :'(

This is a great story! I'm laughing my butt off! I hope you'll be able to write more!

lmao XD this chapter was so funny :P

Ha ha best coming out scene ever. Or at least the funniest one I've read. But ugh. I feel bad for Gram Gram. I wouldn't want someone puking near my corpse.

Are you going to never ever ever write this again? That makes me sad.

Oh my... I found this in someones favourites and was all like 'hmm okay this sounds alright - I'll read it' and then I read it. And oh my...

This is flippin' AMAZING O.O

Ezra is magic - like puppies and ponies getting high on sugar.

Axel is a complete Nazi

Sarah is a biech

Hayden is totally gay

And I love all of it :D

Please please please! update this soon? 2008 was too long ago :(

Annie

I love you - I want to eat your brain :)

oh please, please, post another chapter

this story is so funy w

This is a very good and very intriguing story. I really wish there was more of it to read (hint hint).

Anyway, Update if you have a chance! I'll be ecstatic if you do.

-Marie

Does the fact I laughed when Granny died make me a terrible person?

I hope not.

By the way I love Hayden...for some odd reason. Since the moment I heard about his emo ways. : D.

Ezra's pretty amazing too.

All of your characters are very distinct and rounded (in a characterizational [woah, that's a /really/ big word] way), not to mention they are entertaining as hell.

: D

Great story so far, and I'm excited to see how it progresses.

Oh god, this was hilarious. xD Too bad you've...disappeared...or died. Or something.

Ah well, I'll just re-read this if I need a laugh. :D

LOL OMG I LOVE THIS. WTF. Ezra is so ...

OH MY FUCKING GOD

ROFLMFAO

xD This is so hilarious. Ezra really does cry for attention, doesn't he? But I think albinos are cute. I've had ever since I read one of my favorite books that had an albino main character. I couldn't picture him as anything but sexy, so that pretty much stuck to my image of albinos. I feel kind of bad for Hayden (well, to be honest, I think I feel bad for them all) because everyone's either ignoring him or making fun of him. xD But it was hilarious when he "killed" his grandmother. Aw, poor dear, it probably wouldn't of happened if he hadn't done his hom-o-sectal kiss. xD I wonder if his kiss with Ezra was spur of the moment, or maybe he's the one with an albino fetish. You're making a novel for Eraser? Will it be anything like all of this so far? If so, I'm in. xD To be honest, I like slash, but it's odd for me to picture Ezra as sexual...it's kind of scary. xD But I wouldn't mind an extra where "Axel and Ezra make sweet sweet love". xD Er, yeah...