Reviews for they'll hang
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
i love the ending to this. it's so tradgic.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
I really like the line "the night they shot the moon." I like astronomical references in poetry - they're very soothing. I don't think this is your best piece. I'm not sure who these people are, why they're being hanged, when this is taking place, where this is taking place... All these things are questions that are nice to see answered in poetry. If you add more specifics, then this might be better. Keep writing! :)
The Devil's Sins chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
I really love the way this is put. It's very simplistic and has great detail. I love the sensation while reading "the frost covered waves".