|Reviews for Other Fish In The Sea|
| Q Quixote chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Hi again! This is actually quite rhythmic, and reading it is as pleasurable to the lips as it is to the mind. My only suggestion here would be changing the "The"'s in the first stanza from "the" to "that." It would evoke a feeling of familiarity that would be right on par for this poem.
| Crimson Ara chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
| popprincess-angel chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
i like this it has a nice