|Reviews for Softly|
| Stiff Spines chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
That was really great. It could definitely be a really good song.
| Kurt Wagner chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
I was in a relationship like this. its when i figured out that lust and love were two different things. *sigh*
I like the repitition, and the rhyming flows nicely. One thing though;
"truth that our minds can't bear" I think it might sound better if you don't use a contraction, as in "cannot" instead of "can't". Just a suggestion :)
As always, nicely done.
P.S. you changed accounts? this one seems more poetry-inclined, is that on purpose?
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Wow, it's amazing! i love how it's all in italics.. nice
| Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
One word; wonderful... No, on a more serious note, it was very touching and exactly what you named it. Especially for the 'whisper softly in the air' and 'kiss my lips so tenderly'.
| son of frost chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Well written, the writing was dark and seductive, it's always interesting to read that sort of writing. I enjoyed the repitition of certain lines, but I felt that one or two of the rhymes were a little forced. Keep writing, and thanks for the review.
| Anaare chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
First of all, thank you for the many reviews. I don't really read fiction on Fictionpress (weird, huh?), so I thought: let's look at some poetry from criti-sized!
A wonderful poem, indeed. I think it has a nice charm to it and the imagery is beautiful. Good use of repetition, as well. So, excellent work and once again, thank you.