Reviews for Disheartened |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw , theyre cute . great job , i really liked this story . :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw , poor victoria . hahaha i thought the i still had it part was hilarious . well good job .(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect Ending Becky! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Vicki, I hope Landon comes back soon! I know the last chapter will be the end, and I can't wait to read it! BTW- Thank you so much for my picture of True, your drawing will be in my book if my publishers get it off the ground :) That is, if you are ok with that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting...3 weeks and yet he still isn't back. Hmm...I wonder what's going to happen and the tension is killing me. Well, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter to see if he comes back so update soon. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh...are you kidding me? Do please update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter because I'm not really really interested in what's going to happen to the both of them. _ I'll be waiting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow , that sucks . -not the story , what happened . poor her , omg . this is really good , update soon ! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw , she got it back ! & the endings cute , but seemed at bit cliche-ish when he said a dream come true . lol , but still it was good . (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, no Missy, no cliffhangers here... what happens now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite interesting...and it seemed like Victoria got her heart back along with a token. Aha...I hope that baby in Nicole goes away but if it doesn't...I do pray that it'll turn out to be a baby worth being an angel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't tell me this is the end! NO... but I do love that Vicki got her heart back and Landon has a chance to live happily ever after with her with returned love :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story you've got going here...I'm looking forward to the next chapter and wondering what's going to happen between Landon and Victoria. I hope all turns out well for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa , interesting chapter . i feel super bad for alex , all he wants is love . poor thing . but still this was really good , keep it up . & update son ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Becky, I'm getting excited for the battle! I love how you describe Victoria's feelings, the turmoil of finding her heart again- sigh! I will be "on pointe" for the next chapter! :) Thank you for my review, I truly feel the same way when I read your stories-damn, we are some talented women! Hugs, J |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! No fair on the cliffhanger though! Can't wait to read more... posting some of mine right after this :) ~Jarah |