Reviews for Disheartened
bbyxhann chapter 20 . 7/9/2009
aw , theyre cute .

great job , i really liked this story .

:D
bbyxhann chapter 19 . 7/9/2009
aw , poor victoria .

hahaha i thought the i still had it part was hilarious .

well good job .(:
Jarah Kollar chapter 20 . 7/8/2009
Perfect Ending Becky!
Jarah Kollar chapter 19 . 7/7/2009
Poor Vicki, I hope Landon comes back soon! I know the last chapter will be the end, and I can't wait to read it!

BTW- Thank you so much for my picture of True, your drawing will be in my book if my publishers get it off the ground :) That is, if you are ok with that?
Yuura chapter 19 . 7/6/2009
Interesting...3 weeks and yet he still isn't back. Hmm...I wonder what's going to happen and the tension is killing me. Well, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter to see if he comes back so update soon. _
Yuura chapter 18 . 7/5/2009
Oh my gosh...are you kidding me? Do please update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter because I'm not really really interested in what's going to happen to the both of them. _ I'll be waiting...
bbyxhann chapter 18 . 7/4/2009
wow , that sucks .

-not the story , what happened .

poor her , omg .

this is really good ,

update soon !

(:
bbyxhann chapter 17 . 7/4/2009
aw , she got it back !

& the endings cute ,

but seemed at bit cliche-ish when he said a dream come true .

lol , but still it was good .

(:
Jarah Kollar chapter 18 . 7/4/2009
No, no Missy, no cliffhangers here... what happens now?
Yuura chapter 17 . 7/3/2009
Quite interesting...and it seemed like Victoria got her heart back along with a token. Aha...I hope that baby in Nicole goes away but if it doesn't...I do pray that it'll turn out to be a baby worth being an angel.
Jarah Kollar chapter 17 . 7/3/2009
Don't tell me this is the end! NO... but I do love that Vicki got her heart back and Landon has a chance to live happily ever after with her with returned love :)
Yuura chapter 16 . 7/2/2009
Nice story you've got going here...I'm looking forward to the next chapter and wondering what's going to happen between Landon and Victoria. I hope all turns out well for them.
bbyxhann chapter 16 . 7/1/2009
whoa , interesting chapter .

i feel super bad for alex ,

all he wants is love .

poor thing .

but still this was really good ,

keep it up .

& update son !
Jarah Kollar chapter 16 . 7/1/2009
Hi Becky,

I'm getting excited for the battle! I love how you describe Victoria's feelings, the turmoil of finding her heart again- sigh!

I will be "on pointe" for the next chapter! :) Thank you for my review, I truly feel the same way when I read your stories-damn, we are some talented women!

Hugs, J
Jarah Kollar chapter 15 . 6/30/2009
Love it! No fair on the cliffhanger though! Can't wait to read more... posting some of mine right after this :)

~Jarah
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