Reviews for Third Time’s a Charm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhh please do a part 2 to this, this cliffhanger is too much for me~ it's so good (the story haha) and I kinda wanna know what happens. damien still has her number, what if he needs to contact her outside of work or something and notices that her number is the number of the random caller? (ok this is really long, sorry) |
![]() ![]() I'd like you to continue this, she may have hung up but he still has her number and one of them could still figure it out. They could continue to talk on the phone to get to know each other until one of them says something so irrefutably like what their boss/employee would say. You could make this heart warmingly romantic please take this advice. |
![]() ![]() You suck. D story was okay tho. I hated d ending |
![]() ![]() I love this story, it is different from anything else that i have read, i wish you did a sequel to this or made it a mini story, would have loved to see this continue. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! i'd love for you to continue it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would have made such an amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :) Honestly I'd like to it (random calling) since there's a good chance to get a good conversation with a random stranger who doesn't know you so it's safe. But you're right, it goes in one roller coaster ride when you get to know each other. I should have known. Great story! :) I love your works! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to think that he called again, or he looked her up in the phone book and realized that she was his assistant. Then they'd share some awkward glances at each other at work until eventually Damien confronts her and is being all awkward about what he said over the phone and is telling them to forget about it when the protagonist suddenly blurts out that she likes him, too. Then they get together and have a weird, happy relationship and eventually get married. That is my headcanon and nothing is going to dissuade me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg ! The ending ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was extremely good. Kinda makes me wanna start random dialing, but I'd probably freak out as soon as someone answered. Or, I might have a laugh attack. Either one... :P Anyways. Oh Gods. This doesn't feel like it should've ended. If you ever have time, try and continue it, please! It has great potential. Or you can just add another chapter so it'll... Even out. I dunno, it just doesn't feel like it's ended. Or, it's ended but it's not satisfying. Ya know what I mean? This is bloody brilliant, just not totally what you hoped for. Shouldn't the protagonist get the guy? Hmm. Just consider adding a little something, 'kay? :) That would be really awesome! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would absolutely die if you continued this! Please continue it? I will love you to pieces if you do! And cookies, I 'll give you cookies... :3 great story I reallly liker it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is cute! There was a time when my friends and I were so bored, we dialed random numbers and asked for random people. One of them turned out to have the same name as the person were looking for, it was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will let you know i was screaming after i read this going," OMG! R U KIDDING ME?" i think it would really complete or rather give it that "whip cream with a cherry on the top" ending :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should really consider making this a two-shot. It felt like it ended on a cliffhanger. But overall, it was really interesting. I kinda wanna try this 'random dailing', but knowing me I'd probably burst out laughing as soon as they answered their phone :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story, but I'll be honest with you... the ending made me sad. I'd really like to hear about the fallout of Damian divulging his identity our keypad-happy heroine... Especially since the feeling is mutual. But aside from that, it was a really sweet and quirky story, and I very much enjoyed reading it! |