|Reviews for Stupid Perfection|
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
First off, I'd like to mention how terribly sorry I am for not reviewing your work sooner, after those wonderful reviews you gave me. I just moved to Canada, so I'm a bit... I can't think of the correct word. I'm sure I will later.
I just realized that a lot of your poems have phrases or ideas that are repetetive throught the entire piece. Funny how I notice that now... I like how in the beginning of the poem, the speaker is annoyed with the subject, then towards the end, there's no more annoyance. I hope that made sense.
And as for me deciding what word to use, I'll go with busy, even though that doesn't sum it up quite right.