aww. :)

Eros and Psyche’s story is one of my favorites, and you've done a good job re-writing it. Please Update Soon. :)

I haven't read that many well-written Eros/Psyche fics. So your's is just one of the few. I've noticed that it's been awhile since you updated this and checked your profile. I do hope you put the whole myth into it since I like te descriptions and syntax that were used in this chapter.

Very nice. I love the story of Psyche and Eros. My all-time favorite book is still C.S. Lewis's Till We Have Faces, which is an excellent retelling of the myth. Quite a few aspects of your story remind me of it, actually. I think that you portrayed Eros very well, you didn't moralize the god be made him approachable. And Psyche's fears were quite believable. The only gripe I have is that you put a period inside the quotes when you needed a comma. That kind of stuff bugs me. I don't know why. Anyway, it didn't inhibit your ability to tell the story. Great job, again.

You know what the special thing about tales like these are? The more they're told, and the more variations they're told with, the richer they become. If I ever get my doctorate it's going to be very hard not to write a book on myths and tales...right, not going to get on that soap box. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this isn't how I would have written this story, but I enjoyed it imensley. Good job. :-D

~Beautiful writing. This is definately my favorite re-telling. Please write more soon. ) ~

Nice writing. I love stories based on classical mythology! I really liked your description, not necessarily the diction but the syntax, like, 'I tried to go as bravely as I could'; very elegant and strong. I think this story could use a bit of polishing ('On my seventeenth birthday, and still without even one suitor...' should probably be changed to 'On my seventeenth birthday, when I was still without even one suitor...' just to make the sentence flow a bit better. Other than that, good job, and keep writing!