Reviews for A Collection of Haikus
Erlkoenigin chapter 4 . 2/19/2008
a beautiful image. "Power" would have been a good title
Erlkoenigin chapter 2 . 2/19/2008
You also like mirrors. "Brilliance" is a beautiful word (a least for me as non-antive-speaker)
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
I like this Haiku. I have always been fascinated by mirrors and this is a very good charaterization
bipedalcooney chapter 12 . 2/11/2007
Beautiful. I love the last line. Keep up the great work.
bipedalcooney chapter 7 . 2/11/2007
I love the peaceful feel to this. A great haiku.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Beautiful. I love the description "world behind the silver." Great work, keep writing.
Inktipped sword chapter 8 . 1/5/2007
Haikus 5 7

then 5 syllables are there

do you see? ok.

The last line of 8

"an equation is born" is

six syllables. do you see?
BearHeart chapter 9 . 10/2/2006
I like it. Makes me smile.
BearHeart chapter 10 . 10/2/2006
Again, well said.
BearHeart chapter 11 . 10/2/2006
Well said.
moonsliver86 chapter 5 . 9/5/2006
i really like this... i'm slightly partial to winter and ice... :)
moonsliver86 chapter 4 . 9/5/2006
i like the imagery of this one... keep it up... good haiku...
moonsliver86 chapter 3 . 9/5/2006
nice interpretation of the TV... good job...
moonsliver86 chapter 2 . 9/5/2006
another interesting poem... this is much better than the first...
moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
this haiku is interesting... the concept is good but the first and last line seem to be oddly constructed... not really sure but that's the way it comes to me... but, overall, an imaginative and well-written poem