Reviews for A Year On
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Hey!

Been awhile, and yet, still, I review :) This piece seemed to go on longer than it needed to although I tend to prefer minimal repition, so that could be preference. I think you could tighten this up considerably and have something that hits harder. These were my favorite bits:

The sun rises, only to shine upon the water,

Dark and deep and so cold even as it burns.

And the sun cannot be seen through the clouds.

Overall, you tackled a difficult subject with honesty and the interesting parallels and images make it a very interesting read.
BearHeart chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Excellent. An indirect indictment, a statement of loss, a cry for rememberance, a plea for forgetfulness. Very powerful. This one goes into my favourites. Thank you.