|Reviews for Plain Jane|
| Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
That was a great read, beautifully written & well paced. It did not scream out "popular kid and the nobody"; instead, it merely implied they were, making the characters slowly unravel without the burden of a label.
Gad, I don't even know if I made sense there. But I liked it, I really did. And she was Filipino!
| jab mila tu chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
write a sequel.
not like something that happens NOW, you know? But like five years from now. Or maybe 10, when she's happily married. and so's he. And they like, meet in a grocery store or something.
something where they won't get together, but he gets the chance to tell her.
| Artume chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Ugh! The last line really got me! Man, that was so sad! :(
Wonderfully written, though, I loved it. But the last line was like a poke to my heart. So sad. And I have NO idea why you didn't want to reveal their names, but it was a cool concept! :P
| hopeless-flame chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
loved how you wrote the story without writing their names. it gave them a sense of privacy. loved the innocence of the love, and how you portrayed them little by little. ) awesome read.
| the rational hedgehog chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
WHAT. That's it? Rawr, you had me so caught up...*sob sob*
But I love it anyways. The ending really caught me by surprise. And it feels complete, even though the main characters don't have names. C:
| Melika Elena chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
This story was so good! Not gonna lie, the end made me start to cry. As much as a follow-up would be wonderful, I think the ending, tragic in its own way, adds to the story. I hate how it's not meant to have a happy ending, but that's how it is, I guess.
| notwithoutyou chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
aw no! poor girl. I know you probably hate this... but do you think you could make a follow up? I'm such a sucker for happy endings and I'd like to think these two got together. And she isn't off living unhappily ever after.
Wonderfully written though :)
| strawberrie0 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Wow. That was a home run straight to the heart. Love love love.
| BluePillow chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
No! You mean piece of shit! Why oh why did it have to have a sad ending? Though, its still a good story and so on, but i wanted it to have a happy ending...
| DeadCooKie chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
You're really good at this! This story was almost perfect, except for the parts where loud noises kept poping up to drown out the names... that was distracting.
| P chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
| NoieD chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I definitely enjoy your writing, but could we please get a happier ending? They don't have to be soul mates but I'm really intrigued by these nameless characters and would love to follow them to the next stage of their lives.
| ecmnesiac angel chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
OH MY GOD...
Floored would be a hgihgly inappropriate word when it comes to reading the end part...
but to be blunt here, I already had a good idea about the 'liking somone' part...
but i like how everything went...
it's sad..but in a good way..
heck..i dont like it...
"like" doesnt even come close, as you say...
i was surprised when the word 'filipino' popped up, though..lol
im a filipino/a, in my case...so...HI :-)
| JamieBell chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Absolutely tragic. I loved it! Thanks for sharing.
| cherrystraw chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
really good! be nice if you would make a sequel