Reviews for Plain Jane
Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
That was a great read, beautifully written & well paced. It did not scream out "popular kid and the nobody"; instead, it merely implied they were, making the characters slowly unravel without the burden of a label.

Gad, I don't even know if I made sense there. But I liked it, I really did. And she was Filipino!
jab mila tu chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
write a sequel.

not like something that happens NOW, you know? But like five years from now. Or maybe 10, when she's happily married. and so's he. And they like, meet in a grocery store or something.

something where they won't get together, but he gets the chance to tell her.
Artume chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Ugh! The last line really got me! Man, that was so sad! :(

Wonderfully written, though, I loved it. But the last line was like a poke to my heart. So sad. And I have NO idea why you didn't want to reveal their names, but it was a cool concept! :P
hopeless-flame chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
loved how you wrote the story without writing their names. it gave them a sense of privacy. loved the innocence of the love, and how you portrayed them little by little. ) awesome read.
the rational hedgehog chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
WHAT. That's it? Rawr, you had me so caught up...*sob sob*

But I love it anyways. The ending really caught me by surprise. And it feels complete, even though the main characters don't have names. C:
Melika Elena chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
This story was so good! Not gonna lie, the end made me start to cry. As much as a follow-up would be wonderful, I think the ending, tragic in its own way, adds to the story. I hate how it's not meant to have a happy ending, but that's how it is, I guess.
notwithoutyou chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
aw no! poor girl. I know you probably hate this... but do you think you could make a follow up? I'm such a sucker for happy endings and I'd like to think these two got together. And she isn't off living unhappily ever after.

Wonderfully written though :)
strawberrie0 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Wow. That was a home run straight to the heart. Love love love.
BluePillow chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
No! You mean piece of shit! Why oh why did it have to have a sad ending? Though, its still a good story and so on, but i wanted it to have a happy ending...
DeadCooKie chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
You're really good at this! This story was almost perfect, except for the parts where loud noises kept poping up to drown out the names... that was distracting.
P chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Aw.

Ayos. :)
NoieD chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I definitely enjoy your writing, but could we please get a happier ending? They don't have to be soul mates but I'm really intrigued by these nameless characters and would love to follow them to the next stage of their lives.
hitomi-kun chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
OH MY GOD...

Floored would be a hgihgly inappropriate word when it comes to reading the end part...

but to be blunt here, I already had a good idea about the 'liking somone' part...

heehee...

but i like how everything went...

it's sad..but in a good way..

heck..i dont like it...

"like" doesnt even come close, as you say...

nice one...

i was surprised when the word 'filipino' popped up, though..lol

im a filipino/a, in my case...so...HI :-)
JamieBell chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Absolutely tragic. I loved it! Thanks for sharing.
cherrystraw chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
really good! be nice if you would make a sequel
34 | Page 1 .. Last Next »