Reviews for The Fall of the House of Barka
moongazer7 chapter 2 . 8/1/2008
“airforce

which the he planned to enlargen”

Take it the so it reads

airforce

which he planned to enlargen
Soul Of Music chapter 2 . 11/1/2006
sweet, this looks like it's gonna turn out into a great story dude.
Lord-of-Fools chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Not bad, but it's Malian, not Malinese (I even checked to make sure)
Turtlesurfthewaves chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Hey this is pretty good! I am impressed. Again, it seems like you are not giving much detail and it is a lil. confusing, but it really caught my attention. I applaude you, good job! :Two thumbs up: