Reviews for Skin Deep
Guest chapter 33 . 4/1
Verry nice! Loved the storyy
Darkheartsfiction chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
This was so adorable. I love that Coredan wasn't utterly defenseless. Loved that ending with the dog.
R. Ficst chapter 33 . 5/3/2017
Thank you for posting! Congratulations on completing your story!
R. Ficst chapter 10 . 5/2/2017
DAHAHAHA! Londel being glomped by Coredan is so fabulous.
ryoish chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
Super super awesome! Can't get enough! Thank you author! :D
sodok chapter 33 . 1/5/2016
Hi,
I read this story years ago. I just found it again so I thought i should write you now that I really liked it and thank you for writing it!
ajashire1 chapter 33 . 3/29/2015
Wonderful. Really it was. I absolutely loved Coredan, he was just so freaking cool in so many ways.
Sorry that this review is short but I really wanna read that epilogue!
Thanks for the read.

-Aja

P.S This was beautiful
evelynrose.joseph chapter 33 . 8/10/2014
i am highly awed n amazed by the story..i loves it too much..how i wished this story publish as anime...it's wonderful n best story..i enjoy reading it..my favourite character was coredan..he was brave young men..he hold strongly into the loves he felt at londel..i respect him..i respect his braveness..
justanotherdot chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Are you on aarin? I haven't read much of your story yet but isa too... similar up to the names. Oooor not? Gonna have to do some digging id its just me.
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Hey, I am here to share some great news. This story was added to the Slash Category over on A Drop of Romeo!

Here's the Review:

"Helen Thinks: I want to just start off by saying that “Skin Deep” by Anego is one of the most captivating stories that I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time.

“Skin Deep” follows Coredon as he becomes Prince Londel’s servant after stepping forward to take his sister; Koreina’s; punishment when she is overheard slandering the crown heir because of his appearance. Life is Londel is not what Coredon expected due to the crown prince being a lot more relaxed, not caring about being called “sire” or any other term of title. However, what Coredon did not expect was for the crown prince to have affections towards him, nor did he expect to return them...

What makes this story so fantastic is the numerous characters that Anego has created. Yes, the royals that we meet might be a little more relaxed than those you would usually read in a fantasy story but I think that is what makes it stand out. Despite these little quirky changes, the characters are consistent throughout the story and develop in leaps and bounds as the story progresses. You feel a rapport with every character and the emotions that Anego wants you to feel for each one - love, hatred, disgust etc - is delivered perfectly through the writing.

My only issue with “Skin Deep” is that Coredon seems to go through a lot of scrapes... I know that some characters are meant to have bad luck and it is written to show how much he loves Londel but at some points you feel yourself thinking “just how lucky can one guy be?”. However, despite feeling this once or twice as I read the story, I could not close down the window (and trust me, I needed to as I was supposed to be sleeping!) because I just needed to get to the end and see if - despite the bumpy road - could the two men have the happy ending they deserved!

With a wonderful range of characters, a fantasy plot that is superbly written as if the realm was real and a completed status, “Skin Deep” by Anego is definitely a story that you should add to your to read list. Especially the extra epilogue that Anego posts on their livejournal that earns the story its “M” rating."

Keep writing,

Helen xo
rosieroo chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
I really like the concept but there were a few things that don't sit right with me. I assume that this is set in a medieval kind of fantasy world? There were a few noticeable times where what you wrote didn't make sense, for example, antibiotic ointment in this chapter wouldn't have been around then. Using 'k', 'see ya', 'bro', and 'hunny' isn't correct for that time period either.

Also, I'd love to know a rough estimate of Coredan's age - maybe you've already given one and I missed it? Oops. But all I've noticed is that you described him as a 'young boy', which in my mind is around 7 years old (which is pretty disturbing since this is gonna be a romance hahaha).

I hope that we'll get to discover more about Koreina, since she seems a bit one dimensional at the moment. I'd love to see some character growth from her!

Anyway, I'm continuing on! Don't get me wrong, I do like it so far, it's just those few things were very jarring to me. Thanks for posting this!
xyz chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
This is one of the first yaoi stories I ever read. I think on Aarinfantasy 2006? It always stayed with me. And I came back to it every once in a while. I liked it that much. So thank you very much for sharing!
JayAus chapter 33 . 2/22/2014
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
I loved every moment of this story and wished it wouldn't end.
Thankyou so much for sharing this with us :)

Jay
Krimsyn chapter 33 . 12/6/2013
Great story! I have to admit that I had some "ill-willed thoughts" regarding what I wanted to happen to Marta (thank you for what DID happen to her *evil grin* I was secretly sitting here going "YES!")... I really like how balanced most of the drama and lovey-dovey-ness is and how sweet they are to each other-so cute! I read the "real epilogue" and loved it; I think it would've been fine on here. Anyways, all-in-all, it was a great read that kept me on the edge of my seat and had some rather unpredictable scenes, hope you continue writing :)
opelleam chapter 33 . 10/21/2013
Love your story, i was totally inside of it for 3 whole day.
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