Reviews for Crying in the Rain
Nosside chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I like this poem. you set a great rhythm.

I also like your community,Dying From Life. You've a good collection of works.
a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
frozen sunhine chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
I love the way you've written it... and ending the poem with its title, it kind of gives emphasis to it... it's simple but really great.
Anis Nyari chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
This is really beautiful...
Katherine Bettany chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
This is thought provoking and powerful. Then ending is great - 'crying in the rain' is simple but effective.
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I love the repetition. Great diction here. I like this - great piece.

You should check out some of my poems -"Mona Lisa" and "Four Letter Words"Thanks.
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
whoa. very emo.
Penguiduck chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
*claps* Bravo! This piece is well-written and gets the point across nicely. I love the rhyming scheme you used- it works great with the theme and adds emphasis to what you're trying to say.

Good job! Keep writing!