|Reviews for Me and Jack|
| guerillero chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
| Loopdeloop chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
middle section is weak. there are a lot of allegations but no evidence to support them. the first and last parts are magnificent however. your rhythm is impeccable.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
oh, i like this. the repetition is enchanting.
| riding shotgun in the sky chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Beautiful images, and great flow. Fantastic!
| hey maria chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I like the strong descriptive tone to this. Very well-written; nice job.
| temerity chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
You have an amazing style. Keep writing!