Reviews for I Love You & All Your Flaws |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did fairly well at discribing the story. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it seemed that you kind of jumped into everything a little fast. you should have slowed it down a little and put in more sensory details. it was pretty good overall though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to favor participial phrases. But do not over use them. It gets very grating on the nerves. Nice story though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can kinda relate to Lex. I loved the first chapter, it was really well-written. Can't wait to read more of it :o) |
![]() ![]() Gosh ! I LOVE THIS STORY, and the plot is such a great idea ) youre Great at descibing everything, Great Job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story.. I love how you described everything.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love it. keep on at it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story idea; very great chapter. I can't wait to read the rest. |
![]() ![]() that is so upsetting that they cant see eachother as much...anyways really good chapter cant wait for the rest xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() i actually really like this story, more than just having sexual content, it really has a strong story line starting. i can kinda understand it alot as well...most women seem to be like that...well, not most i guess...i had a few liek that though!anyway, nice start i like itPEACE |