Reviews for Lethargy
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
i liked the style of this poem, with the italics. nice touch.
saccharine asphyxiation chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Very nice. I like the repetition. You very aptly captured an atmosphere with this piece.
Ammom chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
It's short, but I do like it, especially the last line.
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Well this would suck if it happened. But a nice poem.
Arafax chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Nice...interesting...
Noihseret chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
short and sweet! usually I do not like that but you used the effect perfectly and it worked well with the idea. speaking of which, I like the idea of 'lethargy' stopping you from 'running away again'. I am not sure if you meant this piece to be a medaphor for some something deeper, but I certainly feel something more than what's on the page.

keep up the great work! I am really enjoying this
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Ooh, nice. I really like how you formatted it. Like how you made the first four lines normal, next four italicized, next four normal, and the last for italicized again. Nice job. Keep writing! You're a great poet! :)

- sarah (sarah1491)
Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
I like that!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
This was really good, I liked it a lot. Great work and definatley keep writing.