|Reviews for A Boy in Girl's Clothing|
| Akira Kaitaki chapter 3 . 12/6/2006
I want more!
I'm really liking the story and I thought that, from the previous chapter that Lysander liked Kylen, though it would be kind of cute to see Nik and Kylen... .; but which ever you choose or do is up to you and I'm sure it will be awesome ;
Now if only I knew why Nik's dad wanted him to go to the school as a girl... unless that was told and I missed it ~~;
| Akira Kaitaki chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Very good so far I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| Wandering Oblivion chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
Well this is kind of late but better late then never right? well i really like your story it is very mind grabbing. Will Kitty find out? That is my question... but I guess I will have to wait.. please hurry and update.
check ya later,
| Abstruse Blue chapter 2 . 9/14/2006
No worries, the pacing is fine for me. The nature of Lysander and Kylen's relationship is begining to become apparent, least to the readers heh. Well Nicolette told Mel so now she knows, makes me wonder who will be the next to discover that Niklaus/Nikkie is got some different plumbing than your normal girl? haha Possibly kitty? They are sharing a dorm. Hm, it shall be interesting. I'm looking forward to it, update soon!
| Abstruse Blue chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Well this has a lot of promise. I am so intrigued, especially about Kylen. Really, what IS up with him? And what is the nature of Lysander and his relationship? Will Niklaus be the one to find out? Oh...I MUST KNOW! n_n Please update soon.
| Finnyh chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Wow, a pretty impressive start. This sounds promising and I feel it has extreme potential. Catchy title too! Summary is a little vague but Hey, it still attracted my attention!
Witty and well described. A good range of vocabulary exploited. Generally flowing but I advise a little more detail and general characterization needs to be exhibited to enhance our insight into their lives! (Just to make things a little clearer...)
In agreement to your other reviewer, the opening was rather implicative that Nicolette was to be your main character. Whether this was intentional or not, I found it quite cleverly misleading!
Brilliant and unique plot. Great balance of dialogue and narrative!
I really enjoyed it; I don't want you to misinterpret my "constructive" critsizm for flaming! I'm just being picky today! (God, Derek, you Damn hypocrite...)
Good luck with the continuation of this story. Should be a good one! Best wishes.
| ainedamdz chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Hm.. I have to say that the chapter 1 was pretty long... Ehrm, anyway. Good start here, nice descriptions, witty dialogue.. Cute story.
But I must admit there was a bit of let down there.. I expected Nicolette to be the lead, but seems that throughout the story, it was her bro who got most of the attention.
And there were still a lot of gaping holes there, which I hope would be filled up in the next chapters.
But on the whole.. Great story! Keep it up and we'll see where it leads.