Reviews for Why Can't I?
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
An interesting poem that can be interpreted many different ways. It could have to do with parents or professors or even objects but the most likely interpretation i think is love...or at least that's how i interpreted it. There was a small gramatical error but that's no big deal.

Orion Demasecus
unspecified chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
wow, i know the feeling, great poem! you are amazing!
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Nice work. I think a lot of people, myself included, can relate to the feelings described in this poem. One thing I noticed: you seem to be missing a word or two in the line that reads, “But when will I be able to choice in it?” Other than that minor mistake, this was well done. Keep up the good work!