Reviews for The Life That Passes
iamthedave chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Real interesting story. I like the tone, it's very bleak without being maudlin.

Obviously the wonder is how and why he came to be all alone.

Technically there's little criticism to offer. No silly misspellings, grammar's all good, imagery is used well. Although, I think there's a missed paragraph break in the third before last paragraph, at 'Actually, in recent years...'

Other than that, good job!

Please read my stories. Preferably not Hunter and the Hunted first. It seems like everyone reviews that and doesn't look at my others :(