Reviews for You'll Miss Me When I'm Gone
Untitled and Unfinished chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I felt that some places it was a bit chopy, and the rythem was off, but maybe I am just not reading it right outloud. But other places the rythem was really good, and the rhyming was good for the most partas well. The stanzas were excellent! Very orginazed...easy to read. I think that you're word choice was good, with the exception of a few things..."I'm just a gnome on your lawn." Maybe it's just me, but it seems a little weird. It's good poem overall! Good Work! :D
Dark-Night-Tigress chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Yeah, but as you said, life does go on. Sadly, but surely.
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Great job, I can relate. You don't now how many times I said that about Todd (my ex bf) before i broke up with him. Very good .

Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Wow, I guess gnome is a metaphor who just sits around and then when you leave, it is missed or something, I could be wrong. R&R my stuff too please.