|Reviews for Autumn|
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
This has a lot of life to it for a haiku. I LOVE this. Great work and keep writing.
| hanfiddle chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
This provides a very nice image of fall morning or midday
suggestion for the last line:
In the breeze kids play
which: links the fluttering leaves and the playing kids to the breeze...
Good work: keep on writing
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Such a sparkling image...a short tale of forgotten innocence, at least that's what I got out of this...