Reviews for The Boyfriend
Dominique Diane chapter 18 . 4/9/2013
I had a good laugh :)
breakthehabit chapter 18 . 6/20/2012
yay! Good job. :D
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Epic idea lol. Let's see if the story's good
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
Goodness that must have been SO awkward for Jamie! Really funny though D Great chapter!

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
Seems like a filler chapter, but we got to know more about The Boyfriend's character, even by just those two lines. He seems asshole-y, why does Ashlyn like him? We'll just have to see, I guess!
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
I like Jamie :D I think this is going to be one funny couple! Great chapter, can't wait to see whether everyone falls for it or not!

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I read the summary and I was like, WHAT? Very nice, that was caught me!

Interesting start, I'd like to know more about Ashlyn and her boyfriend!

x mandy
backseat compromises chapter 18 . 9/28/2010
omgosh this was so funny! haha nice premise, nice story, good one!
pandorka42 chapter 5 . 7/14/2010
Oh, man. From the beginning I'd been thinking, "Ha! This is a great set-up to much confusion and comedy." And, boy, did you prove me right in this chapter. Love it!

-A
bubublacz chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Oh, I hope that they wouldn't fall for each other in the end. I just hope that they wouldn't it be a bad ending. But, I do like Jamie's POV not so much for Ashlyn's.
Charlee Rayne chapter 14 . 10/15/2009
:O
Kyllorac chapter 18 . 6/2/2008
Here's your review for winning the RM!

This story was one very entertaining read. Nice job on the summary; it really caught my attention. I also really liked the idea behind this story. You put a nice and realistic spin on the cliche girl-pretends-to-be-a-boy scene. Jamie's character in particular was nicely done. It's refreshing to see a girl-acting-the-guy that still retains her femininity. :D

The one thing I would have liked to see is the middle-ish chapters fleshed out a bit. The whole misunderstanding between Ashlyn and Jamie felt a bit flat and rushed. Otherwise, though, the pacing was great, and the story was very nicely divided up into chapters. Overall, I really enjoyed this story. n.n
Shorty11857 chapter 18 . 3/26/2008
So, I just finished your story (and if you saw my other reviews, I only started reading it a few hours ago) and I have to say that overall I liked it. It wasn't amazing but it was an entertaining, fun, and easy read. I found your characters to be a little annoying at times but that was them not you, and even though you did go into clich├ęs sometimes and there were a few generalisations about certain things, it was overall well written. I wouldn't have minded a little more detail at times and the story to have been flushed out a little more but I guess that's probably not your writing style which is fine, it gave the story that easy/quick read quality which is nice.
Shorty11857 chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
Okay, I have to admit at first I didn't like this chapter much but then the whole Kevin starting to feel attracted to Jamie and his response to the situation just made me laugh (out loud). I was worried this chapter would be the one that would turn me off the story but instead you've got me hooked. Although I can't say I like your characters much, especially Kevin but that's not an insult or anything. Can't wait to read more.
Shorty11857 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I have to say after reading your summary I just had to read this story, although the first chapter hasn't really dragged me in much seeing as nothing has really happened; but your plot sounds interesting so I'm willing to give it a couple of chapters to get going, before I make a decision on the story. Although right now I'm reading on. more on the back of your summary (and anticipation of what's to come) than my impression of the first chapter.
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