Reviews for Forever is a Room
Saleinaenachiya chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
AH second person always gets me confused, and strangely tired. Anyway, i love this story of yours, i could almost picture everything you described...the beginning is what caught me so good start. the ending is a bit of a disappointment not as strong as i would have liked it to be. Perhaps try to make it strong like another start of something, so then it gives the reader soemthing to look forward too, or the end seems to be antother start? if that makes sense. I didn't see to many errors, so for the most part this was a great read. UPdate soon!