Reviews for tin angels
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 10/18/2006
I love the exclamation point part and the flowers thing... great ending to
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 10/18/2006
I love the colors in the beginning and the ending... awesome piece, beautifully written
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
I love the part about the mother's love and how they treat each other... great piece... I love the contrasts between the two
kayla chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
this kind of reminds me of the book My Sister's Keeper. i don't know if you've ever read it. oh well. anyway, i love the way this is written. it's beautiful.
ossining chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
This poem is very haunting. I love all the images you've sewn throughout the poem - hair as serpents, candy apple cheeks, baby girl fingerprints. They are disturbing and appropriate at the same time. I'm not quite sure exactly what to say about this poem. Keep writing! :)
Luneko chapter 3 . 9/12/2006
This is so beautifully real... I love it.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
'Molly,with an early summersmile,'

Beautiful images throughout...

'Margo lit the match thatstarted the flames,but Molly never triedto put the fire outshe succumbed.'

Again, perfectly spoken. Just Brilliant job. Those two simple words, 'she succumbed', describe so much.
In the Rye chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
i like it.