Sorry I havent reviewed earlyer but I can not login from a government computer. I am only up to ch 30 but I am realy enjoying the story. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Keep up the good work.

So the spy is whoever was talking to Larki is my idea. Unless it is somehow Larki...I am going to be very very irked if it is Lex or Olly...well it'll be good, and very unexpected, but sad. Keep 'em coming.

~StarSplit

Wow! Two updates in like threeish days! Amazing! For some reason I am going to keep picturing Dellie as BSG's Dee, which makes her and Olly quite hilarious, since Olly is like huge. So I'm going to believe Okin and Axe's conversation, and say that I was right about Axe. And why do I feel that the detachable bridge is going to cause some slight problems to the marvelously laid assisination? Keep updating.

~StarSplit

Isn't that always how it happens? The more time you have, the less work you do. It is incredibly irritating. But, hey at least you did update. So, um, Okin is not the actual spy is my prediction. Keep writing.

~StarSplit

No! Larki can't die! Wow...a lot of people are getting kicked in the balls lately. Update soon!

Hey, this is a great story, familiar but not too stereotypical, easy to read but not simple. The plot moves quickly and fluidly, and the characters all have their places without being completely cliched. I love it, and can't wait to get the chance to read more.

Ew. I hate writers block. It is an evil thing. Did Larki get his hands on a gun? Because unless Phsycics have healing abilities too, I don't think he would serve any purpose dead. Slow updates aren't the end of the world. At least you do update, and give me something to read.

~StarSplit

Trying to be canadian eh? Good chapter, it's good to get the story behind the rebellion, although I'm still way to suspicious of everyone to trust anyone. Stupid hyperdermic needles ruining good brawls. Keep them coming whenever you can.

~StarSplit

Lovin' it! I liked the part with comparing Olly's brain at times with that of a chipmunk. Unfortunately, I can relate. My best friend says that to me all the time. (Only it's a squirrel in my case. We're weird anyway.) Poor Larki...run boy! Run!

Keep on going!

-J.A.

You're done school? Lucky. I've still got exam week next week...or this week, whatever you want to call it. Nope, main character interaction is fun. And please don't tell me that Zean is the source! I don't think I've guessed him yet. But the eye thing is weird. And creeping me out a bit. So either he's the source, or a phsycic. Have you given enough hints to figure out who the source is yet? Anyways, good chapter as always.

~StarSplit

Wonderful. More reading material. More reason not to do my english summative. SABOTAGE! Still suspecting Dellie for no apparent reason. Random question, have you even seen the new Battlestar Galactica? Because I keep picturing Dellie as one of the characters in that show.

No problem. Its fun to have something to read. And updating lots is very good. So the source in the rebel fleet? Do we find out soon? Waiting for more updates.

~StarSplit

Well it'll be all the better when it finally happens then. :D

~StarSplit

So many updates...it gives me something to do after teaching little kids kenpo karate all morning...very entertaining. I bet that Marcus or someone like that is the spy. Marcus has that vibe goin' on. Of course, it could be someone totally unexpected. Like Dellie or Aaron. Maybe even Larki. (I hope it's not him though...he's one of my top fav. characters.)

Thanks for all the new chapters! -J.A.

I wanna hear how Lex did in the fight! You're having a nice little writing spree, lots of updates. I'm liking it.

~StarSplit