|Reviews for This is Not the Rumba|
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
This is a very interesting piece. The language and images are vivid and dark— almost haunting. I particularly liked the line “blooming out of cobwebs.” It creates a fantastic picture. Keep up the good work!
| eledriel chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Very interesting. I really like the intriguing title and a lot of the imagery, which sets the mood.