Um... Holy WOW!Thats all i have to say (and its a really stupid thing to say im sorry!)

Lord. If I could write one story like this, I would give up writing forever, just to write ONCE like this. Something I struggle with is varying sentence structure, and you do it so well. It ebbs and flows. The descriptions! This is impossibly wonderful. Definitely going on my fave stories list. I'm gonna go see what else you have. BEAUTIFUL.