Reviews for In Limbo Forever
Arichos chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Whoa, this ones a little dark for you, but still...whoa. Really descriptive and chilling by its own, its images just form automatically. Great job
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
such a sad and solem piece *sniff* but yet so beautiful. keep up the great work *thumbs up* take care oh funky one x
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
"Haunted by death, afraid and alone,/Her eyes mist over, her heart becomes stone"

i love those lines, and the ones in italics. This poem is quite twisted, but i eally like it. Nicely written

~Bex xx
Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
really, everyone has that point in their life (whenever it is) that they think of death in it's many forms.

no matter if they wont admit it, they have thought of it.
On Eagle's Wings chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Very eerie. I like the way you make connections.

The beat of some of the lines was off, though. The words didn't flow right.