|Reviews for The Full Effect|
| softersin chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
"I didn't hang on to your number
Cause today's the day for growing old,"
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
i love this. the first three stanzas, especially. the tone to this is almost robotic, level-headed where most would panic. beautiful work.
| the.pink.life chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Ooh, sexy. Creepy at the same time, though. I was just listening to Slipknot while I was reading this, and I was thinking about how that was kind of the perfect music to go with this poem. Anyway. I like the subtle rhyme scheme you've got going on in this piece. It's not painfully obvious, but when you read it, you notice it. The second stanza really kinda freaks me out. It gives me freaky mental pictures. Good for you, bad for me, I suppose. A very interesting poem, by all means. Keep writing! :)