Reviews for chasing cars
softersin chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
simply beautiful
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
wow loved this. I hope the mispelling of morning was deliberate because I thought it added a lot of feeling to the poem. Adored the ending.
Three Cheers for Eve chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Sweet and a little innocent, which sex can rarely be.

oxytocin chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
I LOVE this. 'we find common ground under our fingernails' - fantastic! critiscism none. praise muchos!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Wow this beautiful. From the first line to the last, the imagry was elegant and dream-like. I absolutely love this piece. I'm adding it to my favorites. Keep writing.
like a lover chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
falling into beds from the edge of the world.


i love it.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
I like all the images in this, and I also like the way all your poems seem to connect to each other. It's very interesting. You have a few misspelled words throughout this (like your in the first stanza should be you're, starring should be staring, and mourning should be morning), but that's minor. Your ideas are beautiful. Keep writing! :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
i love the word play in this. great pace.