Love the story! I hope you update soon!

what the hell? so how did he become the captain then?

hm. wasn't expecting that at the end of the chapter. when are they finaly going to get on the ship. i feel like it's been a while since he broke out and he's still not on ship. Hopefully something will happen soon. please update as soon as possible.

I'm loving these updates. I can't wait until they both really began to talk. If you know what I mean. please please update soon. please please

An interesting chapter, but the formatting was messed up.

I so in love with this story it's sad! You have to update soon.

omg! that's hecka stupid that he did that though! freakn male ego man! swear! he wanted to prove himself and shit! what the fuck? if he did actually kill him then they would just get a bigger punishment for it.. cause it's murder! but whatever! jeez!

Hey, I was just wondering if the formatting for this chapter was supposed to be that way. ) And yep, another good chapter- I'll be waiting for the next one!

this was a good chapter. i can't wait till the next one.

Hey, I just happened upon your story tonight, and I read all fourteen chapters in one sitting- and might I say, you are doing an awesome job with this! I am so excited to see an update, and soon! ) I didn't get a chance to read this one before you started editing it, but I think you've done fabulously so far.

I'm so happy you updated. I can't wait until the both of them start to heat things up.

I have a feeling it won't be too long before Brigitte can't resist Murdell's charms. She wants him too much. At least she admits it and isn't denying her attractin for him. She thinks spending time with him will be innocent? Well, it's nice that she's still naive in a way.

One minor mistake I found was this: "She had always felt that boys her own age were far too immature to waste any time ONE." Should be "on". :)

Oh, and I enjoyed the escape from the cell. The banter between Murdell and Brigitte was fun, as was Murdell's frustration. It makes sense that it took that long because it would have been too easy for them to just have found the right key right away. And I, for one, like longer chapters, but that's just me.

Please, update soon! I can't wait until they get on the ship.

haha and that's exactly what he means!

awl cute chapter! update soon!

love ur story! its so good. i luv how you develop the characters.