Reviews for Captive At Sea
MCM315 chapter 13 . 11/29/2006
Aw, I'm all caught up now. Now, I have to wait. I can't wait to see Brigitte as Nathan's captive. That should prove to be interesting since she's obviously attracted to him. I have a feeling she won't be so much his captive before long. I loved how long it took poor Nathan to get out of his cell, by the way. The whole thing with the log and the incompetence of the pirates was amusing. And Nathan trying to get Brigitte to help him while ogling her was also perverted, yet funny. I could just see Nathan's frustration at being locked up. I wonder if the feminine-looking ring belonged to someone he cared about in the past. He's so mysterious, I can't help but like the rogue. Even if he is a pirate.

I look forward to reading more. Please, update soon!
MCM315 chapter 11 . 11/29/2006
This is getting interesting...I love how Brigitte doesn't show much fear in front of Nathan. He clearly draws her to him, and I'm very anxious to see what happens.

I noticed you found the lines to put in between the breaks, only you need them between scenes, not in the same scene. It works fine switching POVs temporarily without the breaks. That's third person writing. The breaks are for change of scenes. :)
MCM315 chapter 5 . 11/28/2006
Sebastien isn't the jerk I thought he was. He seems like a nice guy. I wonder what Murdell did to Gaillard, though, that has him hating him so much.

It might be a good idea to put breaks between the scenes when they change. It's a pain, but FP has bars that you can edit in. It would just make it easier to read.

On to Chapter 6...
akaCHEEKS chapter 13 . 11/27/2006
wow let the fun begin! haha lolz.. i bet you in only a day in his ship.. he already can't keep his hands to himself.. hehe
MCM315 chapter 4 . 11/27/2006
I've seen this story on here for awhile, but haven't started reading it until now. I don't know why and now I'm sorry I waited. It's very well written. I don't usually read period pieces about pirates and such, but I'm hooked. I already love the very masculine Nathan Murdell, and I like the feisty Brigitte. The dialogue is witty and well thought out. I loved the first meeting between Nathan and Brigitte. I can't see her marrying the stiff, feminine-looking Sebastien. Oh, your descriptions are good, too. I can picture all your characters. Very well done.

I'll definitely continue to read this. I just hope you keep updating! So many authors are seemingly abandoning their stories lately, it's very frustrating to start one that's not finished. So, please, keep writing and revising this. I'm glad I have more to read now, though. I'll be upset when I'm all caught up!
liVe-yOuR-fAntAsy chapter 13 . 11/26/2006
Great Chapter! I cant wait till i read what happens on the ship! I love reading the parts where Brigitte and Nathan are together! ] well..update soon!
basketballgirl89 chapter 13 . 11/25/2006
I was kind of hoping more would of happened in this chapter but beggars can't be choosers...atleast you updated. I hope more will happen next update.
Callisto Jean chapter 12 . 11/14/2006
Nathan is one horny guy...then again he is a guy...a pirate nonetheless. :D

I can't believe she just fell asleep! Bleh!

Great update.
Charmmu chapter 12 . 11/12/2006
Poor Brigitte! She's had a terrible day - and only one kiss from Nathan! Excellent chapter. The tension between the two of them is amazing.
serako chapter 12 . 11/11/2006
so, i loved this chapter. not much happened, but i absolutely love the obvious chemistry that brigitte and murdell have. i cannot wait until they're off on the ocean, but ick, i can't stand the idea that her husband is going to be on the ship with them. anyways, i can't wait to read what happens in your next chapter. this one seriously had me hanging on the edge of my seat.
basketballgirl89 chapter 12 . 11/10/2006
aw! that's disapointing. i hate cliffhangers. i seriously hope you update ASAP no joke. Great chapter though. just glad he finaly got out of jail.
basketballgirl89 chapter 11 . 11/10/2006
Will he get out of jail already.
basketballgirl89 chapter 10 . 11/10/2006
i wondor what will happen when sebastien wakes up?
basketballgirl89 chapter 9 . 11/10/2006
Poor ol sod. i really feel bad for Sebastien.
basketballgirl89 chapter 8 . 11/10/2006
i wondor when Nathan will capture them.
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