| Reviews for Captive At Sea |
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   Luciana-Malfoy chapter 9 . 10/10/2006 Yes, I do know what you mean by the seperators for the character hopping. Actually, I have seperators in my original work (MS Word) but as soon as it uploads to Fictionpress, they disappear. I understand it must be confusing. I will try to try different methods and hopefully I can get them to come through to the uploaded version. Oh, thanks much for the reviews, everyone. |
| risingofthebluesun chapter 9 . 10/10/2006 Aww you updated! Yey! It would really help if yopuo put separators in the middle of the scenes...this one was awee bit confusing when it just suddenly turned to Sebastien and Brigitte. I love the spelling of their names, did I tell you already? Anyway, great update and keep up the good work. XD |
| Charmmu chapter 8 . 10/9/2006 Once again, superb work. Nathan's crew is so moronic it is hilarious. |
| Callisto Jean chapter 8 . 10/9/2006 Oh...I really really like this. I don't know why you don't have thousands of reviews yet because you're a great writer! Update soon please! :D |
| tlw1 chapter 8 . 10/6/2006 Enjoyable! Looking forward to more. |
| Charmmu chapter 7 . 10/5/2006 I don't know what the number of pages is but I happen to think the length of the chapters is perfect. I love the way Brigitte dwells on the kiss, and Sebastien is a more complex character than I thought - kudos on both. Your description of Wes is immaculate and I think it's just amazing how humman and layered you've written your characters in general. |
| Charmmu chapter 2 . 10/3/2006 Wow, this is really intriguing thus far! I really love the language, and Marie and Brigitte because they're so true to life. The only criticism I can give is that some of the language is too modern. I'm guessing this is in the 19th-20th century era, and some words like "mom" and "yeah" don't exist. But keep it up, because I love your details and can't wait for more. |
| liVe-yOuR-fAntAsy chapter 6 . 9/27/2006 Great story! please continue! -Stephanie |
| Kiyura chapter 5 . 9/24/2006 Hmm, now you've given me a load of mixed feelings about Sebastien! I mean, I really do like Murdell, even if he's a jerk (clearly I'm supposed to, and usually I do what I'm supposed to when reading stories), and Sebastien was clearly a total ass to him...but on the other hand, he is going to TRY to be a good husband to Brigitte, which makes it hard to be like, "I TOTALLY HATE HIM GARR!" Because, you know, I DON'T. Anyway, good job! Nice characterization, once again, and the writing is holding up. I like it! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Liza chapter 5 . 9/24/2006 Absolutly amazing! Cant wait for you next update! |
| Kiyura chapter 2 . 9/24/2006 Ah! I don't even want to stop to review... But you've done a good job with characterization from what I can see-the captain is looking interesting, as you probably intended him to. Ahh, I'm sorry I don't have the discipline to actually make myself write a real review for this every chapter but I really want to keep reading. So..until next chapter! |
| Kiyura chapter 1 . 9/24/2006 Okay, first chapter done... It's always hard for me to say too much after just the first chapter, but I'll at least say that the writing seems decent, and that you did a good job of making the girls sound pretty properly old-fashioned, without having that stilted awkwardness about the dialogue...I appreciate that very much! Anyway, I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter so...I'll review again in a few minutes after that. :D |
| f.e.r17 chapter 3 . 9/21/2006 i loved it!please don't take too long to update |
| Tararith chapter 2 . 9/12/2006 fantastic :) i can't wait to read more |