Just finished reading and its really interesting(: haha I personally like cyan and fienne but I feel like she might end up with ace...which would be still cool too. Hope you will update soon!

PLEASE UPDATE! ... I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS...PLEASE...! :[

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How about making Fienne not end up with either of the twins? Your readers will hate you anyways. If she ends up with Cyan the Ace supporters will hate you and vice versa but if she ends up with someone unexpected you never know...

AWWWH! I might just have possibly become a fan girl of the twins because that was adorable.

Fun read. Captured my attention.

One of my fave stories!:D I can't wait till the next chapter! :P *Hint Hint*

lol love the ending :)

I really like this story. It's really funny but you're really taking your time updating. Like few years time updating. Are you finished writing cause of writers' block? Darn you writers' block. I shall have my revenge! Mwahahaha! Anyway, please update soon.

Um... I'm really sorry about the last review I sent. But the story was upsetting me.

Anyways, I liked this chapter, and I do hope that you eventually finish the story.

I first read this story when I was about 14 or 15, and I thought it was amazing. and I come back now and reread it and it's pissing me off.

What the hell. You have made Fienne into bullshit. She can't do anything for herself, she's incredibly stupid, she has poor body image, and it's just so incredibly irritating. Are you projecting your self image onto yourtr character or something? If so, stop it.

and for the record, you have previously said that Fienne was 16, in other chapters. Match up your storyline, and finish the fucking story already.

First of all, I can't compliment you saying how i love your story and all. Why? Because i have a friend name Cyan as well. And it just so happens he has a twin...granted it is a twin sister but nevertheless! As much as i'd love to read your story and gush about how Ace and Cyan is SO UBER HOT. I cant. Cause it is SOOOO weird to read about a character with your friend's name...and the fact that you won't be able to see him without thinking OH GOD ITS CYAN DARLING WHO IS GORGEOUS AND RICH.

But I would like to say that your story captured my attention from the moment I laid eyes on your summary and if Cyan Darling's name was different, I'd probably be gorging myself on the likes of the attention of 2 devastatingly gorgeous fictional twins.

A thumbs up for your super interesting story! )

x3 Funny, amusing, AND well-written. I love how

Fienne sees the best in people because I certainly don't.

Her thought process reminds me of my little

sister too.

I just read ur story and its a shame u didn't finish it. I fell in love with your characters. You should really continue it because u r really talented. Here's a suggestion if u have writers block. I should make Cyan her love interest because he is a really deep character and they would balance each other out and as for Ace he should play the role of the really good friend who tends to get protective of her. He can help her grow as a person because of their different personalities. Anyways I really hope u finish this

I've only just signed up to FictionPress so have not been able to review in the past! I came accross this story a while ago and thoroughly loved it! PLEASE update soon!