sososososososososo cute. fienne cracks me up.

omg! thank god i found this story again, phew. YAYY awesome stuff i like. go cyan go cyan go cyan i wanna know their past!

rock on

mean mom... -.-' yes after five minutes of thinking that is the best i could come up with... and i love ace but other then that...

You know, this story's great and everything, but where's the action? You know, the actual part (parts) where they're supposed to fight over her? Wasn't that the whole idea of the story?

Poor girl! She's already confused as she is about her feelings... now your gonna have a Leanne Gerraine in the story.

I'ld really wich Cyan and Ace to stop messing around with her feelings though. if you like her ask her out already!

By the way how does Sera know all of this? Hasn't she been living in the mansion a lot less than Fienne?

this story has got me HOOKED! its so GOOD! hm yea fienne does seem a bit... slow... and she eats ALOT! oi cant WAIT till the next chapter comes out!

Why do they still hang around Katie and co.? after all that they've done to her?

You go girl! Finally some action from her. Thanks, you've made my day.

Just some more questions:

if they go to school together everyday, how come no one suspects them of living in the same house?

And is her mum still the twin's mother's maid?

You are so evil! I love it!

I don't know who i want her to be with. You make them sound both sogod.

She's so adorably innocent and naive and... you get it. I'm starting to hate Carol and the 'Brady bunch' now. Stupid cows. And Katie.. don't even go there.

Your a terrific writer. Absolutely awesome. I can't wait to finish this and read any other stuff you've got.

I thought the twins were meant to be invincible. How come Ace couldn't walk the rest of the way with her? Is is cause he's lazy or not that fit?

And why do they like her anyway? Is she actually beautiful, though she doesn't think so herself? Is it obsession or the soulmate ordeal?

Just a few questions:

What's with the no mention of fathers in both her case and the twins?

And Sera... When we were first introduced to her; brief history and all, you said something about a scholarship... then in the perious chapter you made her sound really dumb. So is she smart or dumb?

Keep it up though, the story just keeps you sucked in the further you read.

She reminds me of...ME. My friends don't classify my as stupid, just slow when it comes to guys.

The twins are so cute (and sexy)

I'm loving this! Every bit of it. Your the man (woman, in your case)

'As much as I wanted to lash out across the table and bite out his hair'

Interesting. You have a funny way of decribing things.