Reviews for Pain and Sorrow
Death'sBestFriend chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
nice this poem is so true.
incandescente chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
i liked your imagery. "Sorrow clouding the eyes/with it’s dark rainy clouds."

i liked too, the persona's grim realization that hey, pain and sorrow hurts but gains herself nothing. i guess it showed me how strong somewhat, that the persona was. -shrugs.

continue writing!