|Reviews for Chalktraced Perfection|
| drippingdreams chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Oh, formatting, how I shake my fist at you! Shake shake shake, I say! Capitals every new line? Double line spaces? Come ON.
Other than that, spiffy. Can't say I really follow it, but I read it as I'd read Gatsby or Return of the Native-for pretty. I LOVE any and all card references, "putrid bubble," and the bit about pretences splashing on impact. Pretty words.