Reviews for Blame
lady moonlight chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Omg I love this one! It made me cry steph, it really is so touching. The line that got me was " So now you are here with that sad girl's on friend". Great job!
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Very good. I hope you got a good mark for it!
Anzula chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
It has very nice flow, but a few of the words are two syllables. Is that ok?
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Hey steph I like it...youll get an A for sure!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Good rhythm, and subject matter. Well done, and keep writing!

~Anna~ _