|Reviews for Greener Grass and New Shoes|
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Very beautiful, I loved this! Keep writing!
| BearHeart chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Good effort. At the beginning the poem feels a bit staccato. I especially like the seventh stanza. It flows more naturally than some of the rest of the poem. You have a great beginning here. I love rhyme myself and it is a challenge to put what you think or feel into a rhyming poem. Keep up the effort.