|Reviews for Changing|
| shadowpreistess chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Hey I like this poem When I entered middle school my friends andrew and samantha did it to me
| Starle Moonlight chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Alright, I've never reviewed poetry before, so if I sound like I don't know what I'm talking about, you're probably right.
To start off with, the tone of the poem is great. It's consistent and relateable, like, I know exactly what you're talking about, and I'm sure many people could say the same.
Umm, I had a little trouble keeping up with the rhythm. Maybe adding more puncuation would help. And you started rhyming toward the end. If you want rhyming, I think you should do it the whole time. But really, it doesn't need to.
Good luck with your future projects!